★ Board 01 - Follow Me ★
Post-creation of this, my first ever animatic, I had the pleasure of getting some incredible feedback from Cody Shaw and Sinnan Demirer. Notes included: pull out wider, clean up my work so it's clearer and more on model, and work on creating a better, clearer story!
★ Board 02 - Hair ★
For my second go at storyboarding, I prioritized the notes I received from the project before - cleaner lines, wider shots, and a more clear story. After another amazing feedback session with Cody Shaw and Sinnan Demirer, my new notes for future boards include: showing better transitions between shots & adding in a lot more acting! Also big no no on the "black outs". This isn't a comic, it's a board! Much like the last project I learned a TON and I'm fired up to continue improving!